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chlorophenothane
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Actually, this has potential. All these poems are for the good of man. Finding our problems and dissolving them would be great, but it's wishful thinking. Perhaps, you should TRY to read some of my other better pieces. No love for today had to be one of the worst pieces I ever wrote and one of my least inspired, I might just get rid of it along with a few others I wrote years ago. Have a look at the other one and hell, maybe a few others and you might like them. I know you hate me as a person, but I only write poetry for the better of man. I know a lot of them discuss problems and how the world might end or maybe even how I think of certain aspects, but there is one common goal I present to everyone...
A better future.
Regards,
TheRequiem.
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
It wasn't No love for today, it was No Love for tomorrow. I tried to make a continuation in present time, but it wasn't as good as the original. You need to quit posting on my work or I'm going to block you. Thanks
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
That is bullshit, Chlorophenothane, a person's own right for poetry is to write what they seem fit to write. It is subjective, nothing more. You can't tell what poetry is - and you shouldn't try to.
There is nothing wrong with submitting poetry on here and expecting compliments - how else do you expect him to grow? What, do you think he'll evolve as an artist based on criticism ?! You need to get a life and stop bothering this man.
Oh ok, thats it buddy... nailed it right on top of the head, I use a thesarus. What a wonderful assumption! I think you do not know what you are talking about and you need to stop "assuming", it is all false. I let other people who "enjoy" poetry read it, not people who bash it. Now seriously, leave me alone.
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
You using a Thesaurus was an assumption, you're right, but judging from your vocabulary being used outside of your poetry, they don't really connect. I'm guessing it's pretty accurate.
And for the last time, I am not bashing your poem - it is called criticism, get over it. If you were a "true artist", you learn to deal with people's opinions on your shitty poetry.
Please, you'll obviously never get off your horse (that is a METAPHOR!) long enough to listen to us peons, so don't reply to this. You're only digging yourself deeper with the same shit you keep arguing with, and you're offering no sense of compromise here.
I understand some low-rate high school loved your poem, and I also understand that was the pinnacle to your righteous poetic background, but what you have to understand is not everyone likes that ridiculous, teenage bullshit. Don't submit your fucking poetry if all you're looking for is compliments. You've come to the wrong place.
Like I said before, go to [link].
Go to work on this.
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We never thought you capable of destroying something beautiful
A better future.
Regards,
TheRequiem.
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
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'Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are.'
CoHM
Critics of Hoarse Mentality
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'Wanting to be someone else is a waste of the person you are.'
CoHM
Critics of Hoarse Mentality
There is nothing wrong with submitting poetry on here and expecting compliments - how else do you expect him to grow? What, do you think he'll evolve as an artist based on criticism ?! You need to get a life and stop bothering this man.
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no.
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
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The hollow black sky is as dark as my inside. Yet, is as sweet as the breath of a newborn.
And for the last time, I am not bashing your poem - it is called criticism, get over it. If you were a "true artist", you learn to deal with people's opinions on your shitty poetry.
Please, you'll obviously never get off your horse (that is a METAPHOR!) long enough to listen to us peons, so don't reply to this. You're only digging yourself deeper with the same shit you keep arguing with, and you're offering no sense of compromise here.
I understand some low-rate high school loved your poem, and I also understand that was the pinnacle to your righteous poetic background, but what you have to understand is not everyone likes that ridiculous, teenage bullshit. Don't submit your fucking poetry if all you're looking for is compliments. You've come to the wrong place.
Like I said before, go to [link].
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